Senin, 11 Februari 2013

PRINCESS SHALOOM and ZACK by: Annisa Amalia 9.3 and Risa HN 9.3


PRINCESS SHALOOM and ZACK
Created by: 1. Annisa Amalia 9.3
           2. Risa HN 9.3
A long time ago, there lived a greedy king and an understanding queen in a magical big kingdom. They had a beautiful and kind hearted daughter, named Princess Shaloom.  She had very beautiful hair. It would show its miracle if it was combed. When she was a kid, her mom warned her not to comb her hair, except she really wanted to help someone. Anyway, Princess Shaloom did not grow alone, she spent her time with a special buffalo which could also speak like human. Princess Shaloom named her buffalo Otis.   In another kingdom, there lived the richest king and queen in the world. They also had a son named Prince Scott. He’s very handsome but a cruel prince. 
As the matter of the fact, Scott‘s family‘s wealth had almost used up. No one knew about that, even a little. Then his parents suggested him to marry Shaloom and used her beautiful hair to keep their riches and their name as the-richest-family-in the world-forever. Previously, Scott and Shaloom’s father had made a deal if Shaloom would marry with his son, Shaloom’s family would get a half of Scott’s family’s wealth. Yea! The-unknown-news made it easier. But, it was heard by Shaloom. She felt so curious and asked her Buffalo to get more information about Scott.
The sun went down while the sky was getting dark. The Buffalo walked home and brought a pack of information. Then, the buffalo told everything he knew to Shaloom and her mom. Hearing that, her mom asked Shaloom to escape to the forest with the buffalo in that night. Her mom didn’t want her daughter to live in a misery. --- Tree by tree they had been trough, they decided to take a rest in an unlocked hut when the raindrop made them wet but they found no one in that hut and fell asleep.
The next day, a poor young man named Zack went home from his work. He cut old wood and sold it to get some money. When he arrived at his hut, he saw a beautiful girl sleeping on his bed. He got closer to see her clearly. Shaloom woke up and yelled because he made her shocked. Soon after that, she began to tell Zack if she no longer had parents and house to live. What? No no no no..does anyone know why she lied to Zack? Ask yourself why :p
The next morning in the kingdom, Prince Scott came to Shaloom’s Kingdom to propose her. Shaloom parents were so sorry that they couldn’t find Shaloom. They knew nothing about her disappearance. Prince Scott became angry. He cursed Shaloom’s parents into stone with his handsomeness. Then he disappeared and went to find Shaloom. Meanwhile, Zack had a sensitive hearing. He knew if danger would come to him. So, Zack asked Shaloom to find some apples for dinner. Shaloom never knew if Zack would risk his life just to protect her.  Aaww:’) How sweet, girls! Here, take my tissue if you want. Don’t cry like babies. NEEEEXXXTTTTT…
When Shaloom went home, she was shocked then dropped her apples. She saw Zack lying weak full of blood. She ran to help Zack.  Shaloom cried and hold his hand tight. Suddenly…. W-w-wait wait.. What about Scott? Did you guys see Scott around here?....  Yeaa he died! HAHAHAHAHAHA HE DIED GUYS HE DIED! FINALLY!!!.   Suddenly..she remembered what her mom said. Then she used her hand to comb her beautiful long hair.
Everything changed. Zack who was lying weak, could gradually be strong enough to hold back Shaloom’s hands and hugged her with love. And Shaloom’s parents were no longer  stones. Then Shaloom carried Zack and her buffalo  to her castle. Zack just knew that this whole time Shaloom lied to him if she had no longer parents. Actually, she had. At the end, Princess Shaloom married Prince Zack and lived happily ever after.-THE END-

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